Slicing through the innocent skin, the knife invites a flow of blood. Each trickle stains the flawless wool with their individual paths, encountering rigids and leaving their traces behind for another to follow. Drip by drip the blood continues and finds an end to its path when it drops into the wooden bowl just beneath the lamb's raw neck.
Mother collects our gatherings and brings the bowl into our house. I find myself hesitant to leave the lamb whose life was just selfishly taken for the sake of another. If it weren't for me, the only and first born son, this lamb's life would not have been spared. But my mind wanders to the darkness of what could take another life tonight. My life.
I turn around, walk to the house, and never look back.
Every second that draws me nearer to the time of night eats away at my nerves. The thought of something so powerful, something that could take my life in seconds, lurking throughout the streets outside my house... sends a chill down my spine.
I have to remind myself that a promise is a promise. The lamb's life was spared and tonight we will proceed to the spreading of the blood across our door. Nothing can touch us. Yet the possibility of a broken promise, a mistake, a slip, still consumes my mind.
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While the blood dries and makes itself one with the wood beneath it, we hurry inside and prepare for the long night ahead of us. We lay out gatherings of hay on the cold ground of our living area and cover them with cloth. On a night such as this, any distance from my mother and father would take away my sanity.
A cold sweat drenches my clothes, giving me the noise of each salty drip leaving my shirt to focus on. I try to keep my mind on the rythm of the drops.
Drip....drip..drip....drip....drip..drip.
I wouldn't have ever imagined its presence to appear so obvious, but the immediate heaviness in the air alarmed me that it was near. Passing through the very streets that the children carelessly play; the streets that are now abandoned in the paralyzing fright of its own powerful charisma.
The presence grows greater and greater until my ears pop from the humid pressure growing in our small cement room. And suddenly, like a gush of wind, its gone.
Screams from afar fill my ear canals like chirps from crickets after sunset. Scattered and unorganized, yet distinct and with purpose. While the shouts of horror arise, all I can do is thank the little lamb whose life was sacrificed for the sake of my own and pray that he would one day forgive me.
Abigail, I do not know what you're talking about...this is really good! I love your idea and how you picked up on the Passover from that one quote. I liked how you focused on the lamb and how it had to spare its life to save the boy. My favorite part is when the mom smeared the blood on the door. The imagery in that part was so strong, I loved it! The part where the Passover was actually happening was great too. The heaviness in the air actually made me breathe deeper as I was reading. The build up of its presence and than its sudden dissapearance was really cool. Overall, this was crafted very well, but I feel like you could have made other connections to Jekyll and Hyde about evil or something like that. Good job Abbey :)
ReplyDeleteAbbey that was amazing! The imagery that was expressed when the lamb was killed really gave me a feel for the intense situation. Also, you did a great job of connecting this to Jekyll and Hyde in the author's note, especially with the excerpts from the story. Great job!
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